yesterday’s composition bumped with my hip
this is yesterday’s pile of beach rocks gently bumped with my hip. yesterday’s composition felt a little too…tight. i wanted to see the wandering stripe, but i didn’t want it to be the first thing you saw. i wanted it to reveal itself as you looked at the image. i like this image better. how about you? i put these two images, along with a third completely random pile, on instagram and asked the folks over there to tell me which one they preferred. as i type this i already have over 300 replies. i will tally them tomorrow, but so it looks like about 40% tight line, 50% bumped line, and 10% random. it’s been fascinating to read people’s explanations for which they prefer–a very interesting experiment for sure.
striped beach rocks from the mediterranean
My life has been lived, for the most part, randomly , guess that is why I liked #3. You can hang out your shingle now Dr . Hoffman
I thought the yesterday was perfect, but I like version 2 better.
This version is quite perfect! Yesterday’s has a definite feeling of being contrived and this one seems spontaneous.